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The Gryphon's Game: Chapter Eight

Sep. 29th, 2005 | 05:42 pm
mood: workingworking
music: Bamboo- Hallelujah
posted by: sanitysloss in sklandor

This is a chapter that's really more fluff than anything. It's fun fluff and shows everyone as a family for once, but it's fluff. I had fun writing this chapter though.

The scene where everyone is debating the existance of humans came to me one night and I decided to have fun with it.

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The Gryphon's Game: Chapter Seven

Sep. 12th, 2005 | 04:30 pm
mood: workingworking
music: Tori Amos- Mother Revolution
posted by: sanitysloss in sklandor

This chapter is one I have a major love/hate relationship with. The conversation between Erik and Aerin has been drastically shortened and the conversation between Aerin and Essani has also been changed. Originally, the conversation was between Nokane and Essani, but it was changed due to pacing and personalities.

Essani is a character I'm not sure what to do with. As much as I like her, I don't have too much of a use for her yet. Maybe it'll become clearer.

Anyway, this is chapter seven. I've gone through it, but again, editing and other comments are greatly appreciated.

Oh, and in case anyone is curious, those titles I've been putting in the cut text? They're just for fun and I probably won't keep them when I get the book published.

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The Gryphon's Game: Chapter Six

Sep. 9th, 2005 | 06:58 pm
mood: workingworking
music: October Project- Deep As You Go
posted by: sanitysloss in sklandor

I've had this chapter finished for awhile, but I forgot to post it. This is one of my favorite chapters just because it's one of the few happy chapters in the story. It also has my attempt at "epic poetry." I have to admit I really liked writing "Mishra and the Dragon."

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The Gryphon's Game: Chapter Five

Aug. 13th, 2005 | 03:08 pm
mood: busybusy
music: Rufus Wainwright- Oh What a World
posted by: sanitysloss in sklandor

A little delayed, but here is chapter five of TGG. Enjoy. ^^

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The Gryphon's Game: Chapter Four (Final, I swear)

Jul. 19th, 2005 | 11:17 pm
music: Bree Sharp- Fallen
posted by: sanitysloss in sklandor

Hopefully, this is the last time I touch this chapter. The changes between this and the last post were mainly grammar things and the encounter between Deneb and Erik ends differently.

Warning: Mature content.

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The Gryphon's Game: Chapter Four (draft)

Jul. 9th, 2005 | 10:50 am
mood: goodgood
music: Tracy Chapman- Remember the Tinman
posted by: sanitysloss in sklandor

Edit: REVISED VERSION TO BE POSTED. DISREGARD THIS POST.

Here is Chapter Four of TGG and now I have to have a disclaimer.

This chapter contains homosexuality, allusions to rape and sex, and Tonari being the person she is. You have been warned.

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The Gryphon's Game: Chapter Three

Jun. 22nd, 2005 | 08:25 pm
mood: accomplishedaccomplished
music: Lifehouse- Somewhere in Between
posted by: sanitysloss in sklandor

This is Chapter Three of TGG, and probably one of the longest chapters (19 pages). I'm pretty happy with this one. Lots of explaining and describing in this chapter. Let me know what you guys think. ^^

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The Gryphon's Game: Chapter Two

Jun. 5th, 2005 | 09:16 pm
music: Counting Crows- Angels of the Silences
posted by: sanitysloss in sklandor

Chapter Two of the Gryphon's Game, and the only one that really needs editing. I have a spellcheck now, so hopefully there aren't as many spelling mistakes, but you never know.

Current page count: 24 pages

Chapter three should be posted... probably this Wednesday.

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The Gryphon's Game: Chapter One (FINAL)

Jun. 3rd, 2005 | 08:59 pm
posted by: sanitysloss in sklandor

This is the *final* chapter one. I swear I will not touch it anymore (except to make any needed corrections). Comments on it is nice, but again, no real editing needed.

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The Gryphon's Game: Prologue (FINAL)

May. 31st, 2005 | 06:23 pm
posted by: sanitysloss in sklandor

*points to the subject* yep, The Gryphon's Game. Most likely be the new name of the story. Anyway, here is the prologue, posted while I still have internet. The only reason I'm posting the prologue is because I changed it.

Editing not really needed (unless it's something major), but comments are always nice.

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